Peach Pit
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Feb 22, 2007, 11:27 AM
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Re: [darkdemon] Newest something
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Blugh.
This has so much potential it's ridiculous. It's also super difficult to critique.
Darken the render's body a good deal, the effect you used on it looks good with the whole florescent thing, but around his head and arms it gets too bright. All of the super tiny squiggles that look like electricity should be extracted (Use transparencies!!!) and placed attractively around the render. The darker crazy gelatin glow things in the background should also be brightened, but not so much that it overwhelms the user, possibly using some more red and darker blue. The bottom blueness needs to be filled up.
And the text REALLY sucks. Put it in a corner.
bye.
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