
t0nersxb0ners
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Dec 10, 2007, 5:21 AM
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The grammar on the first page is atrocious. I wouldn't join a game if I couldn't read the first page. Examples: "a Soldiers" - A is the article for singular nouns, but in this case it is plural. "You have the ability to be a leader and create your own Ghetto Crew to drive to the top or can equally join Ghetto's to help build an Unstoppable Empire." - Look up parallelism. I stopped reading at this point.
http://www.city-wars.com
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