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jongy
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Jul 1, 2008, 8:23 PM

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The pretty much best poem I have written is "Roses are red / get in my bed" or "Roses are red / give me head". But I figured who cares, how is writing a poem going to help with anything? Then I saw this MS Office / Visa / Contiki contest winner. This pretty basic poem won 10000!!! Man I could have easily easily won if I could write better poems :( I want 10 grand.

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Sneep
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Jul 1, 2008, 11:42 PM

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The pretty much best poem I have written is "Roses are red / get in my bed" or "Roses are red / give me head". But I figured who cares, how is writing a poem going to help with anything? Then I saw this MS Office / Visa / Contiki contest winner. This pretty basic poem won 10000!!! Man I could have easily easily won if I could write better poems :( I want 10 grand.
You don't know a thing about poetry, do you?

"yeah I wouldn't ban them from here even if I could. It's like old General vs. new General. We'll see which one turns out better right guys?" - TazG on XBC vs General



Nightshiver
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Jul 2, 2008, 7:33 AM

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A poem is simply a song that hasn't found its melody yet.


-Nightshiver


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luffy 747
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Jul 2, 2008, 7:40 AM

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i like to think of it as the words of those no longer or those not yet with us.

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Heix
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Jul 2, 2008, 9:28 AM

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Thats bullcrap. I studied poetry for two years in secondary school and most of the newer ones sucked really bad.



Dr. Nug
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Jul 2, 2008, 11:52 AM

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i made a girl cry with a poem

yeah

what now, son


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fuego
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Jul 2, 2008, 12:53 PM

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holmes, poems are for chicas. No homie should escribe that [Expletive Deleted] ever


Sneep
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Jul 2, 2008, 5:47 PM

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A poem should have hidden meaning than opens up to you after one, or several, readings.

Roses are red/give me head barely fits under 'rap', let alone poetry.

"yeah I wouldn't ban them from here even if I could. It's like old General vs. new General. We'll see which one turns out better right guys?" - TazG on XBC vs General



luffy 747
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Jul 3, 2008, 3:07 AM

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only because your psyche isnt deep enough to grasp his true meaning.

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Sneep
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Jul 3, 2008, 3:47 AM

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He wants girls to grasp his cock

and more

"yeah I wouldn't ban them from here even if I could. It's like old General vs. new General. We'll see which one turns out better right guys?" - TazG on XBC vs General



luffy 747
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Jul 3, 2008, 3:49 AM

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there are so many more layers of meaning.

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the ace
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Jul 3, 2008, 4:57 PM

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there are so many more layers of meaning.
The act of 'head' in the poem obviously represents the good and evil within each and every one of our souls. The rose on the other hand symbolizes greed and lustful desire.

I mean, come on Routh, anyone could see that.

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Sneep
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Jul 3, 2008, 9:29 PM

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there are so many more layers of meaning.
The act of 'head' in the poem obviously represents the good and evil within each and every one of our souls..
'Give me the good and evil within your soul'

"yeah I wouldn't ban them from here even if I could. It's like old General vs. new General. We'll see which one turns out better right guys?" - TazG on XBC vs General



luffy 747
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Jul 4, 2008, 1:14 AM

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also the fact that it is a red rose evokes an undying sense of passion.

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Sneep
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Jul 4, 2008, 1:51 AM

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He didn't write that part.

"yeah I wouldn't ban them from here even if I could. It's like old General vs. new General. We'll see which one turns out better right guys?" - TazG on XBC vs General



luffy 747
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Jul 4, 2008, 2:20 AM

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did too.

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Sneep
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Jul 4, 2008, 5:09 AM

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That rhyme is probably older than he is.

"yeah I wouldn't ban them from here even if I could. It's like old General vs. new General. We'll see which one turns out better right guys?" - TazG on XBC vs General


 
 
 


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